Sleeping Pills & The Babysitter

A guy catches a gal who supposedly babysits his children (children are never mentioned or appear in the story) as she has changed her school grade via his computer (like in  WarGames  and tells her that her behavior could be traced back to him, so she is in trouble unless she does anything he says, (couldn't what she did still be traced?)She agrees to 'anything'. His wife comes home, takes a sleeping pill, takes a bath and goes to bed. The guy takes the sitter to where his wife is in bed and has the sitter disrobe the wife and stroke her to climax in her sleep, (rape?) while he does the girl.Later he and her go to the visitor bedroom. The next night the wife shows up and claims to have seen the girls hacking and tells her she has to be with her or she is in trouble. Hmmm. Somewhat entertaining. Also features a portion of  The Sleepwalker .

The dirty plot was good, but the overall writing left me feeling detached. It could use a little editing to smooth out wrinkles.

The authers style really made this book for me, the gentle yet exciting way she chose to portray the story is....Well you'll have to read it yourself to find out really

Good read